Saturday, September 29, 2007

Mar


Mar I

No one gets it right

so I won’t diminish you

by applying forced adjectives.

The opposite is also useless;

defining what you’re not

is harder than defining what you are.

I will only say that

drinking your salty soul

fills me up

and leaves me so thirsty.

Mar II

I can’t stop staring

at all the stones

you’ve rounded and

lined yourself with

like a million wet buttons

that fasten you to the sand.

Mar III

It’s hard to imagine

that what they say is true

about you taking men’s lives

in fury and foam.

The hard part is not about

the taking of lives

but that anyone would

resist.

video of the sea

3 comments:

Howard said...

Hey, guys! After Greg helped me to get a Google account yesterday, I didn't get a chance to try & post a comment till today. I'm really just seeing if I set it up properly. I can just imagine all of your friends reading this and pitying you for having such a technologically challenged father. Oh well, they'll get over it! Anyway, Suzy, the poems were really inspiring. I hope this experience brings more of it to the surface. Well, take care. Love you & miss you.

Ashlee said...

What did you write in the sand?

Lewis Byrn said...

I didn't. That's nature for you. :)